>>10274This post is so stupid that I'm confused whether this is an act or if you genuinely think that’s a convincing speech.I love seeing literary devices put to shame with dumb slangy insults added randomly for seemingly no reason. The adjectives/verbs/adjectives/verbs structure works perfectly, but beyond that everything falls apart.
>>10276Oooof course, some people aren't funny, that's hardly news! But why ask me specifically? Are you the protagonist, and is the world revolving around you? I'm happy to point out the writing flaws that caught my eye, that's all.Anyway good night again! May your therapeutic work improve soon. Take care.
>>10273Classic example of a failed simile. Heavily edited for maximum drama effect. Tone down the metaphors already.What "connection"? We've barely exchanged three sentences total, assuming yours count. I don't see where the problem is, unless you guys are part of a conspiracy to drive me insane!
>>10277At least your… writing sucks and is completely unreadable. Maybe focus on that issue before calling others names. Sure thing, I'd love to hear what crazy plot twist you're thinking about.Even if I wanted to be a hypocrite, I couldn't muster the energy! I don't personally care if your character(s) succeeds/fails, neither do I care about the fate of the rice entity.Rumor has it you're in therapy. As I am currently mentally healthy, I suppose it's impossible for me to fully comprehend how hard it
