>>10260"I'm sure they're soberly reasoning away every word of mine as part of their elaborate schemes." Oh come on.That isn't impressive at all, it's boring and overused. What's next, are you gonna quote Shakespeare and claim it shows you read a ton? Whatever happened to the old days of being honest about ripping off something wholesale?
>>10262Did your therapist prescribe you a dash of literary criticism to spice up your writing routine? Was Hemingway too dry for your taste? Like your literary knowledge so far indicates.Hey, I post decent anime reaction images! My humour may suck, but you're overly sensitive and use way too many complex words unnecessarily. It's annoying.
>>10259I haven't made a personal attack on anyone! At least not lately. Not like you've done the same.Oh, okay cool! Who made the first cutthroat comment? Or rather, whose character did it? If you were looking for a genuine start of conflict though, I'd recommend removing all the flowery descriptions and focusing on actual dialogue. There's too much purple prose here.
>>10263Wait, it took you two days to type that out? No offense, but I doubt a script editor would let some of these sentences pass.And oh jeez, the constant name-calling is childish.But sure, tell me more about your complex relationships and somehow dramatic domestic life. Nothing tells me you're a natural-born writer like asking me what I thought of Twilight. That's proper literary analysis.
